Varying Sentence Length
From Moses' brevity to Paul's complexity
Great writers vary their sentence length for rhythm and emphasis. Scripture demonstrates mastery of both short, punchy statements and long, flowing passages.
Short Sentences: Impact
Some of the most powerful statements in Scripture are astonishingly brief:
"Jesus wept."
Two words. The shortest verse in the English Bible. Yet it speaks volumes about Christ's humanity and compassion. Short sentences create impact, clarity, and memorability.
"And God said, Let light be! And there was light."
God's command is seven words. The result is four. The cosmos obeys immediately. The brevity itself conveys God's absolute authority.
Long Sentences: Depth
Paul often writes extended sentences that build argument upon argument:
"Blessed be the God and Father of our Lord Jesus Christ, the One having blessed us with every spiritual blessing in the heavenlies in Christ, even as He elected us in Him before the foundation of the world, for us to be holy and without blemish before Him in love, having predestinated us to adoption through Jesus Christ to Himself, according to the good pleasure of His will, to the praise of the glory of His grace in which He made us accepted in the One having been loved."
Writing Technique
Notice how Paul stacks phrases: "in Christ... before the foundation... in love... through Jesus Christ... according to... to the praise of..." This creates a cascade of blessing, each phrase building on the last. Long sentences work when ideas genuinely connect.
Why is "Jesus wept" so effective as a short sentence?
